Ok first great poem i liek ti specialy the rhyming
and the frist stanza was awsome

jsut these few remarqs

my past was not bad
i have a good life

you shoudkl say :i had a good life :)

other then that iti si a very good poem

i love it
great work

Aw thanks!
yeah i think that would make better sense.. the only reason i didnt really think of that was because like my life compared to a lot of people.. its a good life but idk i guess it would be better if i did that... cause it makes more since to say i had...

but yeah thanks soooooooo much for your suggestions :)
i love it love it love it when people help me out with my poems!
so thank you again! :))