This one is the best your wording is absolutely wonderful and you manage to put me where you were I am so sorry for what you had to go through you are a brave and strong person. And to put these tradegy to words says alot. Keep up the good word.
Cathy

wow....intense

Very detailed, you put alot of thought into this if this isn't true. If this is true then how sad it is and i'm sorry you would have to endure such hurt and pain. Anyways it was lovely in a sad way.

Interesting.. and saddening.. sorry to hear about this.. i liked this piece th0.. i didnt know what was gonna happen.. i prolly never would have guessed the ending.. good twist..it's a shame it's a real twist.. the flow was pretty weird in this, and up until somewhere close to the end, that is a good thing. after that i kinda got confused, but the message was still clear.. good job on this one..

Her hair, matted crimson, was about her head.

i dont understand why you said this, for wouldnt it always be about her head?.. maybe thats just my lack of understanding of the why you used the language.. anyway.. good read.. 4/5.. keep writing.. pZ out =O)