"She paints a perfect picture
She tells a flawless lie
She sings a song of beauty
A haunting lullaby."

^^What a beautiful opening, I love these lines, thery're so full of melancholy and emotion and instantly draw the reader right into the piece along with setting the tone for the rest of the poem.

..Well I was going to make my way through the poem..but I'm honestly stuck for words (Which doesn't happen often, if ever =D)

I absolutely adore this piece, you manage to portray so much depth and emotion throughout and the imagery you pain creates vivid pictures for me as the reader.

The flow in this is absolutely flawless, I don't find it to falter once and my favourite part would have to be the closing lines..strong, hard hitting, something that stays with the reader.

beautiful work.