very good but still stumbled on a couple of words. Work on that and you have a winner
Cathy

Sorry must of pushed submit 3 times lol told you little mind
Cathy

well from what i got out of it, it was really good. i think i would have liked it more if i knew what some of those words meant. but aside from me kinda not understanding parts, it sounded really good. keep it up!

Gud effort!

Great poem. I love the use of words, very original. A deep dark write with lost of emotion and a nice rhyme flow. The only part i didn't get was the bit that looked like it was in french...i failed french at school. But despite that i thought what i understood was very good.

Good poem.. I especially liked the french part. taking it in school.. beautiful language. Keep up the good work ;)

very good i liked every part except for
joie de vivre cause i dunno what that is

Beautifull

thats all xXx