"for that part means more then the rest."
`Than not then. :]

Overall, wow. This poem had the greatest flow to it. I loved the rhyme. I love how you wrote this poem as though you were actually painting the picture right then and there. This piece really impressed me, it was kinda simple but it was very beautiful, hun! It was very adorable :]] 5/5 Great work. This was probably one of the best ones I've read from you [love] poem wise. <3

5/5 for sure. This is a beautiful poem and I know it sounds cliche and everyone says it, but I feel this way about someone and it just made me think of him throughout the poem, I loved every second of it, the rhymes were perfect and what a beautiful picture you painted in my head.

Amazing poetry, I hope you continue to write and awe us all.

Sole x

A very lovable poem that contained heartfelt imagery and fantastic flow. You can clearly intake the deep feeling of love within this poem and the meaning comes very soft and simplistic. The structure was overall very well done and the picture should I say was painted quite perfectly indeed. I do not mean for that to sound trite in anyway whatsoever. I think that you took an applicable amount of time and thought with this poem and I found it to be a very enjoyable read. Excellent work.

Brian a great metorphorical poem of love, may I add that the last stanza fail for me as you change from the imagery of the person to the soul and it detract from the flow,

I still loved it but have another look and perhaps you will see what aI mean, Ray
5/5
PS I will not suggest a final verse but I have some ideas: yet it stands okay as it is.

Absolutly love it 5/5 good job

WOW THIS BEAUTIFUL