I loved this! 5/5! Keep up the good work.

First off I loooove the first two stanzas. Hit took hit and miss and made it hit and not miss. XD

I try to block the words out.
But, they come back without a doubt.

Love. <3<3<3

The truth will be told.
My lies, I can no longer hold.

Powerful.

I think this would be under sad rather than dark, but it's your choice.

I really enjoyed this piece. It oozed emotion and pain.

Five out of five.