I thnk it's very beautiful...atehh..
I can totally relate with it..
from the very title..Just For Once..
haiii..
i Love this last two stanza..
because for me..
the part is really heartbreaking..
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You're quiet every time we see each other
You smile as if there's nothing happened
You laugh as long as you felt happy
Can't you look at me seriously just for once ..?

Can't you talk to me like before ..?
Can't you spare some time for me even for a while ..?
Can't you hug me without ignoring me ..?
Can you ,, even just for once ..?

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Keep up the good writing... just a little improvement on the flow and the rythm..!
gud jOb..I really liked the poem..!☺

Wow that's all the questions im always thinking bout buh don't have nerve 2 say out loud.. this poem is great =]

* That's so depply sad poem,but i love the way u expressed out ur feelings...People change and u did a great work by this poem showing this ! 5/5