Fire exsist in these words as much as they have meaning a true sense of dept but to follow it is not as easy as it may have been for you to write it.

The words are strong but not structured, the emotion is bleeding but there is a mess of words. I dont know if this was intented but it is as complex as it is through provoking. To try hard is not always needed, you dont necessarily need so many descriptive words in this text but it is an interesting read none the less.