WoW! I not easily impressed but the power of this poem, the simplicity of its phrasing and the strength of your word choice add to the heartfelt magic I feel in it.

Damn, this is good. It hit me right in the heart and has touched me like most writers cannot.

*Bows Low* I am honored to have read such a masterful piece of work.

Deana,

Your poems have such a genuine touch to them. How awful it would be if one would one day lose all hope and would no longer be willing to wait:(
A very powerful verse and I truly enjoyed reading it:)

Hugs,

Ingrid

This poem is wonderful. Beautiful flow, very emotional. I really think this poem was very deep.

Keep on writing. :)