GuYzzz... Please rate my poem .. n tell me wht u think about it....

Ok dear, let me beguin to say
waht i will tell you today

to write a poem you should these rules follow
to make it good and not a hollow

frist dont make a big paraghraph inside
it is hard to see waht the meaning reside

break it up to simple light 4 tones line
and she will look much better and fine

and more you should rhym some more
rhyming is somthing we all adore

you can epxress your feeling well ,
you are talented behind this shell

i am expecting to read from you more
can't wait to read that why we are here for !!
:)
*i hope you dont mind my orogin and accept my comment *

I think Moucha as a point for some poems but not for this one. I like the long stanzas they explain alot. Well written with many powerful lines and words. :) 5/5, Em