Don't you think that poetry can be a great relief valve when life really messes you up, you certainly put those feeling to paper in this poem and got your message across though like the commentor before me its flow was broken but in a way that helped its emotional symmetry as at time like what I think you were trying to purge nothing runs smoothly that is why I have given you a 5/5. Nice one S Ray

This poem is awesome... i love it

5/5