Wow.
i like this poem.
pretty good. :D
5/5

Again the rhyming was on off, I think if you wrote a rhyming poem it would be great.

The ending was short and sweet and really finsihed the poem of well.

Good job

Alex xxx

I thought the use of honey, sweetheart and darling was too much, its just too mushy for me but i thought it was good though the flow was a litte off at places