Really great poem ! 5/5

Thank you for appreciating my poem.:)

For those who are reading my poem (nice to know only): i just can't believe that i can make a poem like this. i started to make it eversince the person (whom I used to be my friend) started to be cold towards me (and he didn't even manage to say that he doesn't want to talk to me anymore). and making this poem is one way of venting out my emotions.

but anyway, if you want to give comments, please comment not only for the content of my poem but also the way i express my feelings. thank you.