Dude, that's sad you sound like an awsome guy & if she hurt you like that she doesn't deserve to be loved. It's a really good poem though.=)

This is good to but one spelling error buh i think is supposed to be but. other than tht im sorry for ur pain and loss. :( very sad. love the flow

Very touching unfortunatly it happens :( but one can only move on and show them that one can make it and succeed with or w/o them ...harsh but true....nice poems