Comments : Live Today

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    Bill, your wife is a very lucky woman.very romantic and sincere.I like poems that don't get so elaborate that they lose the human sincere quality. this one maintains that perfectly.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    What a heartfelt piece you have penned. Your words are full of the kind of love everyone yearns for.

    I cannot promise you tomorrow
    I promise you each and every day
    Someday you will feel sorrow
    I promise it will be okay

    How true tomorrow is not promised to anyone. I wish I would have realized that much sooner. Enjoy each day your are given.

    Smile and live each day my wife
    For I live them all just for you
    I give you all the rest of my life
    I will always and forever be true

    I love your ending. The emotions in this piece come straight from the heart.

    Excellent!
    Love Cindy