Good read the word flow was good a little wordy for me otherwise well done.

I enjoy it

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This is good.. I liked it but I like the ending in the other two better!! lol

Well i liked the last stanza
"With a relentless rope or a knife
i would put an end to that feverish life
Death is my resort my haven
my relief from that burden."
overall it was easy to go through.!!!