Wow... This is good.. Great job

Short... but tons of emotion.. great job

Haunting...

Short but full of sorrow and of hatred. Haunting and memorable.
Great job with this poem.
5/5
-Ally

Amazing write...loved the last stanza 5/5

Short and to the point but amazing. I mean this really is fantastic. There is so much emotion in just a few words. I am mesmerized by your talent. Excellent job here.