Walk outside to rain
kiss away my memories
let me forget you
^^^
I wish this was possible,
I only it could come true...
Its so hard sometimes to forget something so close,to just let it fade away, your poem captures the essence beautifully.

Very poignant.
If tears can make you forget the pain and suffering specially hatred then it's good to cry.

This is a very sad and touchy piece of writing. It shows the turmoil you are facing... very emotional poem. And very poetic.

Good work... keep it up

:) great work:D

Good write... I think you maintained a 5,7,5 syllable count :) good job...
touching piece...

keep writing

So simple yet it says so much. A beautiful piece of work!

The whole thing fits so perfectly, nice job!

5/5

I liked how your words were simple, but they made sense. I felt a lot of emotions, too. Everything flowed very well, and I loved the ending. So, I thought you did a really good job. 5/5

Caitlin =]

I love it

I like this one very much because i can relate, i know what this kind of pain is and u wish for what is said in this poem. it hurts very much to let that person go but sometimes u have to.