This was deeply dark, and beautiful.

"I ran after her while she was crying
but moonlight was a trap for venery."

Those lines are my favourite. Don't know why ... they're just so ... rich, and powerful.
Very nice job, Dark Spirit.

But what happened to all your poems?

Sweet! really good word choice =]

i loved your creativity

~tia

Definitely a unique style here. It was beautiful.

Good dark poems are always very interesting and this one is one of them.
Certainly it's very captivating. Well constructed lines. Good use of words. Very well penned.

Nice, i really like this poem. keep up the good work.