Nice! that poem flows very nicely liked it alot! 5/5

Great job it flowed very well! good job with the rhyme scheme

Hey, ANOTHER AUSSIE!!!!!!!
anyway-bout your poem-i really like it-
It has a great flow, is easy to read but still holds uncertainty and the emotions of someone who is confused and starting to fee like theyre going insane-i think it really captures that.
Great work
5/5