Wow hun... this was filled with emotions that all poets should express. the way u told him how u still care for him no matter what was truely amazing and just a great gift that u shared with everyone. great job.5/5
**lesthat

It is kind of sad how this turns out. I guess some things are not meant to be no matter how good they look.
You are yet an unpicked flower temps so dont worry. One day you will find what you are looking for.

I liked this a lot. I thought it was truly heartfelt, and I'm in the same position with my best friend, kinda. So, that right there hits at home, ya know? But anyway -- I thought the piece was beautiful. I couldn't find anything that needed to be changed at all, because everything was written perfectly. You've done a great job expressing how you really feel, and how you feel after you've been let down. And sometimes, a friendship IS better, because on occasion, having a relationship makes it hard to have a friendship with someone if the relationship doesn't work. Anywho -- I quite enjoyed this piece. It was very nice to read.

Five out of five.

``Briana

*screams. -insert whatever name you prefer to be called by on here, because I don't know-

This was so filled with emotion!

If I had to sum it all up, I laid my heart out there to be dissected.
`dissected. dissected! What stunning imagery that created right there. Holy jeez. And it's so true, too. A literal metaphor for what we do when we give our hearts to someone. We open ourselves up and they get to do whatever they want with our heart, because when we have someone we love, we don't care what they do as long as we're with them. And when they tear us apart, they have access to rip us to shreds.

Third stanza--I really like the fact that you start out pretty negative. It sounds almost as if you're angry with the person, but at the same time you still care. Here, that really shows. It's great revealing such strength, to be able to get through it and still remain friends.

Your ending is filled with strength. It was like, this whole piece you went through every part of your life with this person, and now you'll stay friends with them, but the other half of you that loves him needs to move on--and the first step is admitting it and accepting it. Which is what it sounds like you do here.

Amazing job, hon :)

..__MiNDYY

A letter full of emotion. A letter where your feelings have flowed out in a controlled manner. This letter seems to have come at a time when your head and heart had come to terms with a failed relationship. You express that you feel no hatred, infact, quite the opposite, you except that your bond will continue and that those feelings although changed will endure the years ahead.

Well done, a well rounded letter.

Michael

There was a lot of emotion put into this piece and it was perfectly written, amazing job.
Each stanza had a very good flow and i really liked your choice of wording used. Excellent job, your a very good poet.
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Thanks for sharing. I actually envy you.. My terrible story is Too Little.. Too Late..

I love reading this prose slash letter it is awesome and i can realate to it

I think most people can relate to this in one way or another. descent poem. 4/5

Very touching, I can feel your loss.