Uhm nice , one i relaly enjoy it , from the part he is looking for his angel and to teh end , nice one
i would say you eed to work more on teh rhyming

and too much long one !!!
dontyou think

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over all a great one !

Omg that was great!
filled with alot of emotion etc
wow

Brought tears to my eyes.... so beautiful yet so sad...

great job Hailey...

5/5