Comments : Shower me with Your Mercy

  • 14 years ago

    by Adelle

    I feel the emotion in this piece very deeply and the cry of your heart to our sovereign lord I could relate to the feelings you express in this piece but I feel that the flow needs to be worked on.

  • 14 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Mashallah....beautiful so touchy ! God is always testing us in life and only at Him we can rely and find rest and peace by having Him always in our mind and praying obeying His Rules.
    Soooo nice ur poem Amena congratulation 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Nice write.. keep sharing ur wonderful poems..

  • 14 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    So so nice.. I wish that Allah forgive us all.. Thanx for this great poem.. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Heba

    WOW.What a wonderful touching piece..I truely loved it..Actually I LOVE your poems a lot...
    excellent.5\5.

  • 13 years ago

    by Noo track to walk

    I pray that ALLAH forgive us all ! ameen .
    Great words - I love ur work =).

  • 13 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful piece on faith. 5/5, Em