I feel the emotion in this piece very deeply and the cry of your heart to our sovereign lord I could relate to the feelings you express in this piece but I feel that the flow needs to be worked on.

Mashallah....beautiful so touchy ! God is always testing us in life and only at Him we can rely and find rest and peace by having Him always in our mind and praying obeying His Rules.
Soooo nice ur poem Amena congratulation 5/5

Nice write.. keep sharing ur wonderful poems..

So so nice.. I wish that Allah forgive us all.. Thanx for this great poem.. 5/5

WOW.What a wonderful touching piece..I truely loved it..Actually I LOVE your poems a lot...
excellent.5\5.

I pray that ALLAH forgive us all ! ameen .
Great words - I love ur work =).

Beautiful piece on faith. 5/5, Em