Comments : Killer dream

  • 15 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    Aww Amber, that was so sad and sweet!! gosh, I loved it!! lol ^.^

    "
    I would be laying there in his
    arms staring into his crystal
    eyes. Then I'd move in for a kiss
    and it felt like we shot a pistol."

    Lol favorite stanza ^^^ love how you used pistol for it. lol kinda made me laugh xD

    Well, great poem. Loved it. So keep it up Amber!!

    5/5 of course!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    I'm speechless.... God so good! beautiful.... romantic and catchy!

    keep up the good work!

    5/5

    <3

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude love this poem ^.^ really wondeful (^_^) keep up the wonderful work (^_^)