hi thanks for reading my poem,i love to read your comments thanks lots

you asked me a question in the comment page of my poem my chance, i dont understand the question. please report back to the same place and rephrase your question. thx

Not bad...not bad at all....bit ropey with the beat of it..but better than most.

the first part was great... last part could have been better... but over all i liked it :) keep writing... ill read a few more from u