That was AWESOME! I really liked that alot! i think that is very cool that u wrote this in a song format dont worry ull find a way to put some music behind it. ive always wanted to try writing a song so i give u 2 thumbs up! 5/5

p.s.- feel free to comment or critique any of my poems if u want to :-)

I think this is one of your best.
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Thank you! lol i do too..... ;-)

Lol i did write it as a screamo song.