I liked this. It was very vute, and I can tell it was right from the heart. I can tell you really love him and care for him. The only thing is that I think you should try to use less commas in this. Too many pauses I think.

5/5

I find this as a very cute love poem, and yet it seems very heartfelt. It's not just another "oh, im so in love with you" poem. So all in all, I really liked it.

The Angel of Secrets

A very sweet poem! Great job, there are one too many commas but apart from that its a very good piece =]
5/5

Hey, great poem, I can relate. I'm glad you got back into writing, you're very good :]

keep up the good work!

5/5

This is nice and exactly how I feel about my boyfriend and I am sure he feels the same way for me. It's really beautiful and perfect.

Thanks for the great poem.

I can't honestly say that I loved that, the rhythm was off, and the vocabulary didn't draw me in.
There was definatly a simple purity to it though, seeing as love is usually so complicated, and at times hurtful yet your poem showed the innocent side of pure bliss.
I suppose it's hard to be very original when love is such a worldwide emotion, that everyone seems to want to write about.
3.5/5

Great job. =]
5/5