Wow wunderfull that was grate full of power and emotion.

Wow Charles thats an excellent poem my friend you sounded very emotional,it flowed very well and rhymed well also, but i wonder did you give it to him?

Grant

Wow..
very good nd emotional indeed..
flows nicely nd does not hide wot is felt..
nice job done Charles.. keep it up.. with all do respect farwell for now.. nd t'was a 5/5..

~ Tiffy ~

That seemed to be written with such emotion ,and was a very good read from start to finish.

Oh wow dude love this truly darkness poem you have (^_^) 5/5