This is very good.
Well done! :D 5/5
~FountainsOfBlood

This poem is amazing, sorry for your loss. hope ur ok and hope to see more poems from u soon. take care. 5/5

Hey this is an awesome piece, i was amazed, this has to be one of the best poems i've read on here in ages.

Wow this poem was brilliant, it was so sad and u expressed your emotions perfectly. well done.

Hey.
well im totally lost for words.
this poem was so well written and so touching.
hope to hear more from you soon.
keep it up.
5/5

It is trully a great poem and the repetition of the stanza gives it an extra point because is refreshing..... a great poem for the emotion you put into it