Comments : The Passion Never Subsides

  • 11 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Lovely poem! every line is so very poetic. creative piece of writing. the last stanza is fantastic!

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    The second stanza was my favorite, describing the rise and fall of the relationship. I enjoyed your word choice and description in this piece, it was a really nice read. There was a subtle sadness to it, it wasn't overbearing and melodramatic, it was accepting. Nice work.