Comments : The Expendable

  • 13 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Truly a piece of art...lovely work! The words flow and the word choice is also good as well. I enjoyed it!
    Take care,
    Ignoris

  • 13 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    This poem made me realize how your poems like have a couple of stories in to one I think or it may be that im tired. and hey i saw a ryhme or two.
    And a unique combo. War and love, makes me wonder why no one has thought of before but original.

  • 13 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    I'm speechless. This is so amazing. I love it! Your use of words was wonderful and it flowed quite well. The imagery was also very strong. Keeps up the beautiful work.
    ~Kayla

  • 12 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    You have a brilliant vocabulary. I'm not quite sure what the story is though, a mordant look upon war? Intertwined with an almost sarcastic feeling of love? Or am I way of the mark? Apart from not having much of an idea what it was about, this was a wonderful write. Well done