Comments : My Unspoken Words

  • 15 years ago

    by Gem

    "I remember she once told me,
    The reason why she wore sunglasses
    Was to hide from people,
    So they couldn't see the pain in her eyes...
    Now I understand..."

    it's amazing what sunglasses can do. You can hide from the public, from friends, lovers and obv the sun. ;)

    Such a poignant ending. it really gets the heartbreak across to the reader yet with limited wording. So it hits even harder.

    Nicely done!
    gem x