Ok first, i gotta say i love the poem, 5/5, but please dont do that last line ok? <3 and peace,
DJ

You're getting better and better, i'm so jealous... so beautifully written, i love it :]

Awww Amber thats so sad, but I know what you mean. Very good. and the emotions spilled out, and the flow was very good.

I liked it ^.^

5/5

This is a very good poem, and please if you meant that last line, don't do it, im not just saying this but its just wrong and too sad. I know the pain is so great right now and hard to live with, but it will go away in time, even tho it seems like it won't. I ve been there, and Ive been able to move on. You will too. Just keep living, life is a beautiful thing. LOVE

Wow this is deep
i like it

but plz dnt do wat tht last line says

Whoaaaa
Shocker towards to the end.
Don't do that again k?
Love the poem otherwise! :)

I really was not expecting this.... Oh.. That is so heartbreaking, i thought the poem was going to end in a very different way but wow, it really was a profound poem.
Well, before praising your work i'd like to repeat what the other comments above are saying: don't do that, dont, please. Think about the rest of people who are by your side, family, friends.. Im sure there are people around you who would suffer to death if you abandoned them.
Well, on the whole, that was an amazing piece of work, romantic first and then very sad and depressing. Well done, you transmitted the feeling emotively. Keep it up and be strong!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS