It's alright girls:) I wrote this around the same time as I wrote"On the edge of heaven".
The pain has subdued already. I wanted to post it anyway because I know my former hero reads all that I post and I hope he will feel a little bit of what I had a truckload full of: pain.
Thanks for caring, you are such sweet girls:)

(((big hugs)))

Ingrid

What a beautiful and wonderful poem, Ingrid. I loved and enjoyed reading it.. I'm glad the pain has subdued. :) Take care, Ingrid.

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Bri~

A beautiful write Ingrid,I'm glad you are past the pain.It leaves its mark,in your sad but beautiful write. Hope you are well.

Beautiful
truly wonderful work
love it
this poem is truly
a great work (^_^) 5/5

Wow this is amazing. i'm agreeing with soso. it seems as tho you are re-telling an expiriance of mine as well.
beautifully written, so amazing.....

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A beautiful chocolate with just hollow space inside
Is what you are, you never cared for me
^^ i liked the way you described him this was a very unique way to word it ! it shows that you were more in depth thinking about thiss i love love loved it!
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