Creative. true.

Nice work, good word choice...rings true.
Take care,
Ignoris

Nicly done. had me on the end of my seat wanting to keep reading, i really wish it was longer so that i could just keep reading. nice description of things.

ibe
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Ohmigawd.
This is SO good.
I added it to my favorites.

"Giving up, giving in
To the hatred, built within
Hearts become, deeply heavy
Morals seem, weak and petty"
Jeeez, you're SUCH a great writer.
This poem gave me a lot to think about.

Absolutely phenomenal bub.
5/5, once again..
-me.