Comments : Lusty thought (shadorma)

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Very sexy:)...This Haiku really rocks:)
    Good job,plz keep it up..

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I'm sorry..I mean this Shadorma...And I think it's ur 1st time to write an erotic one...but it's so wonderful...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Sex obsessed
    crazy fond of you
    addicted
    by your love
    makes me crazy and horny
    angel of the lust

    Ok... love and lust are mixing up here. Love makes you lusty! ;)
    It's a good one. Last line is very interesting. Liked it because it's not bare raw poem!

  • 15 years ago

    by Aryaan

    A erotic love poem! it's full passion! very poignant poem. very well penned!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ares

    I agree, very well penned and a bit unexpected, I must say, but it totally rocks and the language you use is tasteful and delicate:) wonder who inspired this?

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Woo!

    Very nice Shadorma!

    I love the words you have used and the fact that you dare to make such a poem;)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid