Wow Line, that was sad yet beautiful. I love the ability you have to create eerie deep atmospheres. I felt like I was that girl and going through all those powerful emotions. Loved it! Hugs.

Linkhorizon-a.k.a: jess (changed my username)

This poem is very very well written. It flowed so smoothly and perfectly, each stanza grabbing the readers attention more and more. Your started off very well and ended perfectly. no flaws here :]

5/5