Wrung?? this word is right ??or you mean wrong?>
runt? i dont knwo this word cna you please explain to me waht you mean by it ?

uhm frist i would tell you doing a 1 block poem is not good for readrer eyes in my opignion , this amke the reader eye a bit bored and afirad to read for the frist time ,

so i think it is better if you cut down to stanzas ,

but i think it was good expression

Wooo...spooky. Getting inside his head.

I think you succeed to get the scenery painted perfectly.

These sentence were capturing my attention: "Her words raped me, so I raped her icon,
Allowed my furnace to beast its desire"

Wonderful job.