The end is beautiful, and I actualy got very emotional. Just be careful not to make her your WHOLE life. You've got to care about yourself first and foremost,

because anyone has the potential to let you down.

That was really a touching piece! the feelings was very emotion and very heartfelt. all the wors are well expressed. just keep on writing all what u feel.. keep it up then 5/5

The last line made me tear up. a beautiful poem, you express some very strong emotions and i admire that. terrific. 5.5