Comments : The first kiss

  • Wow another great poem

  • 15 years ago

    by i care about him

    Thats a great poem.
    that is the greatest feeling ever :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Briana

    I love this poem. The diction and the description of this is perfect. you can visualize every single mpvment from your words!!! another excalent poem!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    Such rich and evocative imagery. Luscious lyricism with an effortless flow that captures our needs and desires. Superb.