Wow i love this! you can really feel the pain in it! good job babe! 5/5

This is an extremely sad but beautiful poem. i can feel your pain in the last stanza. keep writing,

"I'll have to learn to live without
the caressing words you whispered.
Learn to deal with the fact that
forever you will kiss her. "

love love love that stanza!

5/5 ~Toni

Oh wow. i can deffently relate. i hurts wen the 1 u love, loves some1 else. but just remeber, "don't worry about the ppl from the past, there's a reason they didn't make it to the future." =)
5/5
xoxo

Ur poem is simply written that's why it's touchable..I really enjoyed reading it so much..
Good job,plz keep it up..

A great read! very very sad. great job!

Dear Tabi,

Letting go of someone you love is the hardest thing to do, especially when you feel you are made for him...
A wise man once told me that when you close the door to your past, a new door opens and luck will find its way to you once again.
I hope it will, for you:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

This is suchhhhhhhh an amazing poem I love it

Sad!
"Why do i let you
do this to me?
Why can't i just
set myself free?"
I think many people know how that feels.

"I'll have to learn to live without
the caressing words you whispered.
Learn to deal with the fact that
forever you will kiss her."
That's just so tragic! Amazing work!