That's absolutely beautiful, very descriptive and filled with emotion, 5/5 ~Toni

~The beat of my heart
pounds back to yours.
And finally, my heart can
open its such dusty doors.~

that's my favorite stanza. absolutly beautiful. i can relate
5/5
xoxo

Again i love how you just put yourself out there. it made me happy to read this :)

Aww... it's cute.. I love it.Awesome job.. Keep it up =)

Awww, this was really cute.
Great job =]
5/5

Awww!! hehe very sweet!! greatly expressed!

Slowly, you will
pull back my hair
and lock me in
such a loving stare

^^^
I would not know of any girl who does not like to be looked at that way!
A very sweet love poem with an excellent flow.
You did really well on this ,Tabi:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Don't use & it takes away from the poem some. Other then that the rest of the poem was great. I saw nothing else that would need fixed. I gave it a 5/5.