Omgosh Hun dats Completly touching and sadd but cute at the same time lol :).. Keep it titer then tite cuz i loved it!!!

Sad at first, but it ended happy.
i loved it. =]

It seemed alright. I think maybe some more rhyming some imagery would make it a better.

But still it was good tho

Nice.. sad yet ends up happy.. Liked it.. it flowed good.. keep it up..

Hey wow wonderful rhyme flow and great message. sorry you had to go through that, i hope you never do again.

Thats really good =]
And i no just how you feel.
Seriously.

I love it, amazing message. Its funny how one person can make your entire life turn around. When your lifes a complete nightmare, that one person just makes it the most amazing thing of all. Good job =)

AWWWWWWWWWWWW ITS SO FUKIN SWEET
5/5

This was a sort of bitter sweet story started sad and ended happy very nice , i liked it

Grant

Good poem. :) keep on writin!

I like the feeling but it lacks a set structure and rhythm or rhyme.
3/5

Very good with an amazing twist 5/5

This got me gurl, u said it all... nice one keep it up

Loved it! that's all I need to say. 5/5

Svandyke

Sad but sweet... u write pretty great... 5/5