Very good i love it good job

I like this poem....its short, to the point and very well written

5/5!!

Again a nice poem i liked it a lot though it was a bit on the short side you said a lot with few words.Well done

Grant

Now this has emotion in it,
good job you kept it short but gave the reader a sense of what was goin on and how you felt.
Good job xx Hope

Very short, but very good. 5/5