Its hard to hide feeling isnt it?

I like this one its cute

Great work. i can see you struggeling to write down this emotion bbecause its so strong. 4/5

Great job with the emotion once again. The flow was a little icky, but the rhyme made up for it.

"its alrite to feel the way i feel for
you because i know that all
my feelings for you are true.
and that i really do love you..."
^^bring the 'you' in the 2nd line up to the first. but this stanza was my favorite.

Good job 5/5

Thts js so deep..awesome..!