Comments : Crayola 96

  • 11 years ago

    by Courtney

    This made me giggle.
    It's adorable.:D

  • 11 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Cute good word flow to theme match.

  • 11 years ago

    by Court

    Eh?????? That was kinda interesting...

  • 11 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    I liked this. very light and fun

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    It was did not stick to the original rhyme scheme consistently through the piece though....Some stanzas had the second and last lines rhyming and some did not. That also made it not flow very well....If you edited a bit, I think it could be better but you did a fair job.

  • 9 years ago

    by kristen

    Yeah reading it awhile after you write it you can see where it didn't flow too well. lol but thanks for the tips.