Nice poem, very creative

Because nightmares can be oh so real
Monsters aren't just lies
--very true

Grinding dripping teeth
Scratching on the door
"Sweetie, it's time for bed"
"Don't cry anymore"
--they ignore the sighns and make you suffer alone..
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Um, so I'm gonna drag some of the stuff I learned this weekend into the comment..or i'm gonna try..

Dance around the corner, kids
Sing the happy songs
You know not the worlds shadows
Your little song drags on

^^ So one of the things we talked about this weekend a lot was loving god like a child. faith because your worst monsters aren't even real..so this just reminded me of that.

Alouette, gentille Alouette
Lark, oh lovely lark
We'll drag you to the forest
We'll leave you screaming in the dark

^^ Aloutte j'ette Aloutte...j'ette plumere..Livia taught me that song..makes me sad now..we screamed it off my backwall at the people biking by..

So jesse...this poem was really really dark. it made me cringe and it also dragged me back from cloud nine. which is a good thing..it's a softer landing if i get it that way. um..."God is bigger than the boogy man.."

God gives us protection and keeps us safe and we can take comfort in that. I know that doesn't mean the monsters aren't real ((they are. i believe that..as childish as it is..monsters come in shapes and sizes..)) but even the monsters are in god's control and plan...

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