That's so sad...ur poem is simply written but I think it would be great if u used rhyming...
Anyway I really liked it..
Good job,plz keep it up..

This is so sad .. it simple but it says ur in pain.. I really love it nice job in this poem....

Very good job

Who could ignore such a plea?
It made me feel all sad inside:(
I hope you are doing ok..

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Awsome dark and sad love it 5/5

Great poem thanks for the comment

5/5
jess