Aww... this is so sad and i could feel ur pain... but very well writen you know. Awesome job.. =)

I think u wrote sad poems that are better than this one..even though it wasn't bad..
Keep up the good work..

Awsome 5/5

O wowww This one very deep and I could imagine a hand coming out of blood.

Very Descrptive good jobb

So well written :)

10/10
jess

Well written, very dark and sad , but its good to get your emotions out and if it was something you just thought up then you have a good imagination

Grant

Great poem