Angel?? sexy look from first place , angels dont do that, lol

uhm, mean you knew the deivl and stil want to dance

lol
great

but as i say tooo long one , and you msis many stanzas with the rhym soo ,

i think it is incomplete even teh suibject is atracting and the titiel is way good ,

i am nto voting now i will see what you wil do with it later

Well personally, i quiet liked it
i think it was well constructed and i enjoyed the topic!!

well done

xoxox

I really liked this one gr8 wording and i loved the way u phrased things : )

HOLY ..... SKITTELS OMG loved it loved it... going in my favs :3

This is one of my faves of yours so I'm adding it to faves, alot of people do give into temptation. 5/5, Em